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Weaver

You line the walls of my heart
With the false promises you weave.
Like beautifully draped cobwebs
Gathering dust - in them I can't believe.

The little spiders on the webs
Are the little seeds of my doubt.
I want to get a duster,
And blast the cobwebs out.

The silvery sheen on the webs
Mesmerise my eyes,
What mesmerises me even more
Is the way you spin your lies.

PoppyA

@PoppyA

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Comments & Feedback (15)

A beauty pops πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Really like this. Love the metaphor of the web. πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

Wow this is fantastic. I love the metaphors, especially the spiders being seeds of doubt! Well done! πŸ‘πŸ˜„πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Beautiful

Excellent pops superb 🐱🐱🐢🐢

@leelee101 ; thank you πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

@eddie12309 ; glad you like it ☺ like the idea of Walls as a word - so much you can do with it! πŸ’—

@Nom ; thanking you πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

@mirabahjojabo ; thank you glad you like it πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

@glen ; tar Glenneth πŸ˜½πŸ’—

@PoppyA thanks. That's why I picked it. Thought I'd be serious this time. 😊

Fabulous imagery and metaphors, brilliant! πŸ’šπŸ’š

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@naaviie ; thanking you, Sweet πŸ˜ŠπŸ’—

@RichWithey ; thank you kind sir 😊😽

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