Kicking down the door,
Pouring through the window,
I can't take it no more.
Dripping on the people,
Splashing on the walls,
In their reign of water,
You can't stop their fall.
Fast as the rivers,
Lonely as the sea,
We're quite similar,
The raindrops and me.
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
#household. Sit with me, and stay a while. I'll warm you if you're cold. Together watch the shadows move. Upon a field of gold. Sit with me, say nothing. Let lovers tale be told.
The window is dark. The window is scary. The window is blurred. The window is looking out,. Out into the night sky. The window is bright. The window is enlightening. The window is clear.
to describe a color; a sight to one that's sightless is impossible if they aren't in love. to love is when colors bleed together. to describe a sensation is simple when one can feel.
Wind chimes on a stormy night, If you wish, come true it might. Spinning, swirling, Twisting, twirling, They sing like angels, they soar like kites.
#household I keep it bound and chained Under lock and key Away from prying eyes Where nobody can see My paintbox of emotions A thing I keep secure For they must not mix Each emotion must be pure The...
You line the walls of my heart With the false promises you weave. Like beautifully draped cobwebs Gathering dust - in them I can't believe.
#household Turn the handle, turn to stone I know that I am not alone I'll be safe, I will select A mental barrier to erect Somebody has said hello.
I have a heart that's made of stone, It's not a fragile thing. Once upon a time it was whole, It's stone from too much breaking.
@naaviie @smellyfingers You know what I suddenly feel like? Like I'm at home and some important people have arrived on my doorstep and I don't know what to say to them.
Beautiful! I didn't think you were talking about us, silly billy! Oops!! But really, I'm not any more important than you.
@naaviie ππ Well, I guess not. I'm just not used to talking to so many people on Opuss. Usually it's just me and my friend @kikikookara and a few other younger people, or the occasional commenter who says 'Good' or 'Nice' and moves on, and that's that.
@naaviie Who, me? Or Mr Smelly over there? I suppose you know him already. Thank you. Lovely to meet you too. π
You! @smellyfingers has been here longer than me! π and thanks, glad you got your posts working again
@naaviie Well, I guess it doesn't take long to know quite a few people on Opuss. It's like a school, in that you know most people, as in you know their names, and what they look like, but you only actually know a few people properly.
@naaviie I guess on Opuss you know the people you are following, or who writes the same kinda stuff.
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