Sugar-sweet like songs of birds,
Petals burst in vibrant tune.
Rhythmic like a serenade
In the golden afternoon.
New like fresh-made lemonade,
Green grass grows for Spring’s parade.
Technicolor-painted scenes
Invite an upbeat attitude.
Mockingbirds and bumbles bees
Elevate aesthetic moods.
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@wendy3763 @ckahn @wolfwaff thank you so much! Appreciate the follow, @wolfwaff! Just that poem is all it took?? 😱😊❤
Ya, that's all you need I know with I the first 5 lines of any written word if I'm gonna like it or continue reading it
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