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I saw this beautiful poppy
Bent down to see it close
I love the fragility of its petals
Almost see through like a ghost
The sweet smell of poppies
Make my heart skip and dance
I gently want to hold one
Cupped tenderly in my hands
Holding it like a nurtured egg
Protecting it as I look
As I reluctantly let go
The frail petals shook
It's funny what emotion
A simple poppy can bring
A lone red poppy
In the grass....what a thing!
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Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.
As the sunbeams. Tickle my eyelids awake. I lie in contented bliss. A look out the window I peep. To see where on the ground the sun does kiss. The breeze blows the trees. Leaves dance under a bush.
Slowly creeping. On the horizon. Following the sun. Turning light. Into darkness. A new time. A new world unseen. Deadly creatures come. Glowing flowers bloom. I'm the dead of night.
I rest Eyes closed Thoughts adrift Fluttering Floating Flitting In the daze of morning It's warmth lulling.
Out on the rock I spread my arms The sea and the world Beneath me Urged on by cliffs You said something But the wind Laughed too loud In my ears and playfully Hid my breath from me.
After the hard rain Sun is coming back Trying to give is some sun and warmth just before setting.
In the forest when I look at the sky, it looks like a five year old scribbled black ink over the azure sky.
Pattering on the window pane. Drumming fingers of the night. Rhythmic noise rains down. Tiny droplets play with light. Shimmering like tiny stars. Falling from the above sky.
Step out of the door, The cold chill sends ice through my spine. The warm colours tells me autumn has arrived. A season of paradoxes.
@smellyfingers @Delilah @Thebeautifulundead THANKYOU my sweets...so chuffed you do like it I thought it was a bit pants...so kind thankayoooo ...mwah xx
@ckahn you have to write something that includes these words...grass, egg, emotion, poppy, smell, hands....have fun my sweet xxx
@naaviie @leelee101 @Fly10 @sjw awwww THANKYOU my sweet peeps...so glad you liked it...muchly appreciated...mwah xxx
I'll try to get to it. By the time I get off work you all are in bed. If I don't make it, I'll enjoy all of yours!
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