Awakening: Part 2

@iPuss

Final Sleep

When the dirt hits your coffin... Just go to sleep... I don't wanna die. So you're gonna have to....

@ryskew

Feedback

Is it possible for people to like and comment to tell me if they enjoyed my short stories. I haven't heard negative feedback yet and am still wondering. Thanks..

@ryskew

Darkness & Despair

I feel blind, engulfed by darkness and isolation. The only thing I can feel is the cracked concrete ground. My senses are slow, and my movements haphazard. The only sense I can work is smell.

@jscott665

The Island

I woke up in a island there was nothing around me I look about there was death above me..

@TheStory

This is real scary I screamed hushed because it was late "strawberries" And started eating my strawberry pj bottoms Scary is it not?.

@Dj_Mac

Evil Pt.5

Terrified, I remembered our break up. I had come home and Was planning to break up with him. I opened the door and there he was - on his knee with a ring. And all our families and friends were there.

@Dj_Mac

The Answer Of The Shadow Part 1

That morning when I was eating breakfast I wondered what the shadow was I knew I'd find out soon. That night I got a letter saying do not fear the shadows signed mr mystery.

@ryskew

Please read: Criticism

Hey, I was just wondering if someone would be able to read through a short story I made earlier, either one of them to give me some criticism and let me know how good I actually am at writing.