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Is it possible for people to like and comment to tell me if they enjoyed my short stories? I haven't heard negative feedback yet and am still wondering. Thanks.

ryskew

@ryskew

Student from the North East of England. I love writing and want to utilise Opuss to share my short stories, imagination and ideas. All constructive criticism is accepted and valued.

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Comments & Feedback (4)

Perhaps the reason you have good feedback is that you do a really good job! Keep it up ^_^

I agree with @CuriousCat

Thanks guys!

@ryskew Your very welcome. Keep up the good work please! I enjoy reading them ^_^

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