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Drag Me Under

I see the store ahead,
I'm nearly close to Town.
But here comes the swam of demons trying to drag me down.
I thought they had all left,
But now there back around,
Why wont they just all leave again so i can go back to town.
XSTABLISHX

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Can you comment on my 2nd paragraph plz! It would help me alot!:D

So, did you like it? I love this by the way! Very creative! :D

Proper good stuff mate

Brilliant :-) this is exactly how I feel sometimes... X

@bipolarbear @aeyjay @Eden thanks a lot, was just sitting there thinking about how I used to feel whenever I had to go out to town, I get a but dodgy round big crowds sometimes. Nice one for your comments (:

Bit#

Loving your honesty and turn of phrase my friend, :)

Thank you very much, I am very new to writing poetry, It sounds silly but It just comes to me. Thanks again for the support (:

Wicked post yet again

@mikailkhan thanks been a slow day for posts but im going to my bed soon to try to write something bigger thanks for the support.

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