Whisper

leelee101 • 1434 followers

Don't look for me
I am not there
But I'm floating
On the air
I'm whisper, rumour
Deja Vu
And while it's false
It's also true
I'm the ghost
In your machine
Sometimes dirty
Sometimes clean
The feeling that
There's something wrong?
That's one of my
Better songs
I'll call to you
Though you won't hear
But you will know
When I am near
Pins and needles
Unease, dread
Yes that's me
Inside your head
I'll plant a dream
Sing like a bird
Then crush you
With a single word
Nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
From feelings that
You can't abide
I will chill you
To the bone
The name's Self Doubt
You should've known...

#general #inner-demons #mental-struggle #psychological-horror

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Jun 22, 2012 at 11:10 AM

Brilliant, wasn't expecting self doubt but you've explained it perfectly 😽😽

Jun 22, 2012 at 11:12 AM

Awww this is brilliant my sweet...I enjoyed this muchly!😘😘😘😘😘

Jun 22, 2012 at 11:14 AM

Awesome dude 😃😃😃😃

Jun 22, 2012 at 11:26 AM

Oooo what a little bugger 👿 great write! 💚

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:07 PM

Great stuff! 😉

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:13 PM

@MrsS @misslittleDHP @sjw thank u all my lovelies for the kind repost 👍😘😘😘

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:14 PM

@sjw ha! I wasn't expecting it either! But it seemed to fit nicely. Thank u hunny 😘

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:14 PM

@DaddyDooDahs @naaviie @MrsS thank u all very much 👍😊😊😊

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:15 PM

@misslittleDHP thank u Kim 👍😘@misslittleDHP

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:15 PM

@misslittleDHP thank u Kim 😘👍

Jun 22, 2012 at 12:19 PM

@leelee101 😽

Jun 22, 2012 at 1:33 PM

@leelee101 Melancholic yet light, its super , sir! 😺

Jun 22, 2012 at 6:57 PM

@melody thanks mel👍😊

Jun 23, 2012 at 1:06 AM

Ah, yes, that little voice whispering in your ear 😔 Wonderful depiction 😌😘

Jun 23, 2012 at 6:42 AM

@Fly10 thanks Leigh. Bit of a ramble. Didn't even think about self doubt until I got to the end and it seemed to fit well! 👍😘😘

Jun 25, 2012 at 6:32 AM

@jana_vandale thank u for that repost hunny 👍😘

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