T ake me in your gentle arms
R eally need your tender care
A nother days not very far
N ever leave me standing bare
S tay together it's destiny
C arefree world invest in me
E mpathy fills what's left of me
N ow you'll see the best of me
D on't fail me now my heavy wings
E ven when the darkness sings
N ow seen winter, bring on the spring
T ogether we'll play angelic strings
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Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx
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@naaviie Thanks, I either nail it or completely fail it lol, it's been a slow few days for writing so I'm just making the most of it when I feel inspired, all the poetry about this morning is helping, some really good writing going on😊✨🌟
@sjw It's a beautiful word, so there was no other way to put it. Ps. I just changed the 'Emptiness' to 'Empathy' emptiness can be mistaken for a bad thing, empathy's all good though😊🌹
@naaviie I didn't even know the name of the style for a while, I just got hooked on writing them. Luckily the words I need to use sometimes fit lol Ps. My notepad has 484 notes, there are so many failures and half done poems, I need to start sorting them out really😃
@DaddyDooDahs Thanks mate, you nailed the alphabet challenge though, it will be tough to follow lol I will fit in xylophone some how😉
Hahaha wow that is pretty impressive!!! I'm a bit of a neat freak so I tend to keep mine organised, but hey, you never know you may look back and find some gems with potential!
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