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Tin Man

He was mechanical in his actions, cataloguing each part.
If he was to ever live again, he must build himself a heart.

The one he had was rotten, had forgotten how to beat.
Petrified and fossilised, through deception and deceit.

Dark and twisted, black and scarred.
Barren and lifeless, stone cold and hard.

He took an ounce of empathy, and a spoonful of compassion.
Half a cup of pride, then with courage began to fashion.

He tinkered and he tailored.
He moulded and engraved.
He would either make a "work of heart"...
... or forever remain enslaved.

Weirdwolf

@Weirdwolf

Random Ramblings of Brandon Wolf

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Looooooovaleyyyyyy. 😊😘

Like itπŸ‘

Awww poor tin man love the poem ❀

This is great...tin man was my fave in Oz :):)

Ooooof you have such a way with words man πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

From now on you're the Word Weaver πŸ’‹

P.s. I deleted the poem Dragonfly. Your question made me think twice about posting a poem like that. Thanx for the repost though 😁

Work of heart - excellent sir. πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

Very niceπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@powpunch well, now I'm curious

Now now @ckahn you know what curiosity could do to pussy cats πŸ±πŸŒ€πŸ’’πŸ˜²πŸ˜±

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'You can't be like me, but be happy that you can't-I see pain but I don't feel it, I am like the Old Tin Man...' This reminded me of that wonderful songπŸ˜” An excellent piece, as always 😊

@Weirdwolf πŸ’“

Neat stuff β€πŸ΄πŸ‡¬πŸ‡§

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Good writing as always :)

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