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"Ready!"

His heartbeat like the artillery boom, reminding him why he had fled.
He had run away from the trenches, he had run for he feared being dead.

"Aim!"

His breathing was erratic, as he choked on his rising vomit.
His men had choked on mustard gas, but now he choked far from it.

"Fire!"

He never thought he'd scream again, after that word was said.
He was certain that at least one man, would take aim at his head.

"Can not one of you lousy lot shoot straight? Come on lads let's get this job done!"
"No wonder we're still in the trenches, with you soapy sods at the Hun!"

"Ready!"

The artillery was practically silent, as it's ammunition trickled away.
All he could do was twitch in agony, all he could do was pray.

"Take Steady Aim!"

Please Kill Me! Please Kill Me! Please Kill Me!
His mind was screaming out loud.
How he now wished he'd gone over the top, at least he could have died proud.

"Fire!"

The poppy fields where silent, a monument to the brave.
Elsewhere a lonely daffodil, marks a broken, lonely grave.

Weirdwolf

@Weirdwolf

Random Ramblings of Brandon Wolf

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Excellent poetry again my friend😊

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More genius. To think it happened much like this... Daffodil's an interesting yellow symbol in contrast with poppies

Very nice have something similar! Good work

Man that is good. 😄

Wow! Amazing!

Great reading. Have you read 'The Rime Of The Ancient Mariner' or 'The Voyage Of The Arctic Tern' ? You could write a

(that send button again😖) You could write a modern day version with all your pieces-ever thought about that? It would be an epic adventure yarn! Love it😉

Excellent once again mate. :-)

A scene painted with such feeling and insight. Not all are heroes but most of us, no matter what our situation, have regrets.

My grandad was one of the few men who would talk about the war, some of his stories were unbelievable, very good mate

@Fly10 I've heard the song by Iron Maiden :) I've thought about writing a few things, but I'll certainly look them up ;)

@smellyfingers Thank You Sir :)

@jojo72 This is true :)

@glensaggs I used to love listening to my granddads stories too ;)

@Weirdwolf I like you

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