Our Secret Place

al_ec • 41 followers

So here we are with another line in the sand
Endlessly dragging our feet through the land
Calmly the waves shift over the shore
Restlessly mending all previous sores
Even the ones buried deep down inside
Together we finish; Our beach should entice

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Very personal to me. I'm glad @sarahgamal inspired me to write this. It is about the girl I tend to talk about on here and the place I used to share with her. We used to drag our feet through the sand to draw pictures and write our names to be seen from the hill behind us when we stood on top. Such a peaceful little secret beach escape...

#acrostic #beach-memory #general #nostalgia #personal-reflection #poetry #relationship

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