This was my first attempt at the acrostic challenge but I decided to go with my other one instead ....
M ove into the sunlight, the sky is clear. It may rain like
E ngland a day or two here.
X marks the spot, on the powdery sand,
I n the warm night you could walk hand in hand.
C old? No way, it's even hot on a rainy day.
O h, how I wish I could take that 9 hour flight again today...
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P hotos trapped under lock and key, H appily waiting to be free, O nly time can tell when that will be, T hey shall stay for now, my friends and me, O n holiday I bought it, by the sea, F rance was...
Won't miss the English weather. The wind and rain and such. I'm up for fun in the stateside sun. Can't wait to feel its touch. Won't miss the daily grind. No I won't miss the job.
#acrostic (secret) So here we are with another line in the sand Endlessly dragging our feet through the land Calmly the waves shift over the shore Restlessly mending all previous sores Even the ones...
Whats the craziest thing you've ever done. Were you once foolish. Were you young. Did you cycle to town in your pyjamas at midday. sing camp songs together till break of day.
Welcome back missed you so why oh why did you have to go pined for you everyday but still you had to stay the sea was your calling life for me kept stalling you left your no.1 fan hope it was worth...
The doorstep is cold. And so is the tea. For it's been a while. Since you sat with me. Seems we've not spoken. For some length of time. So I thought I would add. To a certain rhyme.
Unless people think this one is the better one of the two, I may put this into the challenge instead ๐๐
@BethyBoo haha I can't choose which one i like most! The first had a pattern I've not really seen before very intrigued and this one flows nicely! Well done ๐๐๐
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