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Have you ever felt a sudden surge of hatred for the person you love?
When you're suddenly so angry by the power they have over you?
When you want to deny that just their name makes your cheeks flush?
When you're so annoyed that just a touch from them sends electricity to your heart?
When you want to stop losing both sleep and your mind thinking about them?
When you have to force yourself to not pick up your phone because you just want to talk to them?
When you look at them and hate how much you don't want to look away?
When you realize how lonely you feel without them around?
When you despise feeling completed when they talk to you?
When you wish you could keep yourself from eagerly texting back?
When you detest how your heart melts when you see their smile?
When you angrily realize that you would do anything just for their affection?
When you are sadly thinking of a certain someone while you read this?

blingey123

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Writing is my life. Forever. I want to be an author when I grow up. I write all the time. When I'm happy, sad, angry...it's an escape. Oh, and I love green hearts. I absolutely love them.

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@dougietjs πŸ’š what do you mean?

I've definitely felt this way. Take a look at two of my post 'Scorned' & 'Bleeding' & let me know what you think. There are elements in each of them that relate to what you've written here I believe. Be interested to see if you agree 😌

l@Fly10 I'd actually like to hear from you, because honestly, I see no connection. Both of positively pleasant pieces of prose, but what connection do they have with Conflicts? ☺

Perhaps my interpretation of your piece was different. My initial reading of it was of someone who had loved, but then become bitter over the power their love exerted. They've ended up with a combination of anger, frustration & longing with a cacophony of emotions running through them....all caused by love. I guess that was the essence of my comparisons, as both the pieces of mine I mentioned to you, we're written with the same elements running through them.....the aftermath of love. Perhaps that wasn't your intention in writing it....it's was just my take on it 😌

excuse any grammatical errors above-correct option on comments would be a godsend

@Fly10 actually, you're almost there :] currently...I...am really liking someone. So this piece was for those of us who are currently in love, but hating how lovesick they are. Which is how I feel sometimes, to tell you the truth. About a certain guy...haha...πŸ’š

@blingey123 that last comments what I meant but with a girl instead! sorry i didnt reply for ages my opuss broke a bit :(

@dougietjs Awh, that's okay dear :] opuss is breaking everywhere... ^.^ And what do you mean? What last comment?

@blingey123 the one before mine, don't worry I'm confused too ;) I hope he makes you happy even if you can't be together

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