I've read the debates,
The cards are stacked high,
But only one card brings a tear to the eye.
It isn't a joker, a king or a jack,
You'd never have known it was there in the pack.
It tells a small tale of love that's so pure,
I would have thought it was worth so much more.
So my simple message is eternity starts,
With the beautifully timeless tale of two hearts.
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What is with all of the card poems? Is it some kind of fad now or just a thing you do on this certain day??
@eliseeeegurl every now and then, we pick up an idea and see what happens. It's usually quite fun! π
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