I'll ask the question,
Why leelee,
Does your profile pic,
Have a death star tree?
Your clever twists,
And such wise words,
Make us follow you,
In greater herds.
The poems crafted,
with style and poise,
They make our days,
And become our toys.
So keep on writing,
We walk, you run,
And very soon,
You'll hit two ton!
(congrats on your 200th post mate)
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bryanrobertheap - the online troubadour. Kik: bryanrobertheap
Fellow fans of stories, jokes & plays, I've now had Opuss 8 fun days... Fifty followers have rated me, Thankyou all, sincerely. Your support means a lot For now I see I don't write rot.
Like if you like Don't if you don't The simplest of choices You will or you won't Poems or stories Or something to sing A host of one-liners If climbing's your thing Personally I like Pieces that...
I hit my write number 100,. And posted it into my feed,. I was told by the Lee, congrats but no slack,. So it seems of this poem, he needs,. Thank you, I say,. A smiley or two,. In poetry style,.
Every opuss I read, They're all so amazing But I find it upsetting, When my eyes form a glaze, Because at the end of most, There is this small circled 'c', It's a while since my last post, But I...
Let me speak plainly, Opuss inspires many. Curious characters on a page, Give a high I can not gauge. Freedom to explore, These rhymes and more, Many sides to the coin, Enticing others to join.
Perhaps I've missed something, Where is the mistress of the King. I'm saddened, Truly also a little maddened, I don't see the point, Have we all been smoking a joint. Beautiful words.
Riddle me this Riddle me that Who does love This little noisy cat. Wrapped in black Buttons on the screen Your the puss That makes my face gleam.
Poetry in motion. Minus the commotion. The perfect magic potion. A simple little notion. A calming, soothing lotion. To part this brooding ocean. Because poetry's emotion. When poetry's in motion.
@bryanrobertheap mate thank you. When I get there, it's this piece I shall come back to! And you've bagged a first, never have I received a man poem before! My thanks again sir. 😊
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