I'll ask the question,
Why leelee,
Does your profile pic,
Have a death star tree?
Your clever twists,
And such wise words,
Make us follow you,
In greater herds.
The poems crafted,
with style and poise,
They make our days,
And become our toys.
So keep on writing,
We walk, you run,
And very soon,
You'll hit two ton!
(congrats on your 200th post mate)
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bryanrobertheap - the online troubadour. Kik: bryanrobertheap
Fellow fans of stories, jokes & plays, I've now had Opuss 8 fun days... Fifty followers have rated me, Thankyou all, sincerely. Your support means a lot For now I see I don't write rot.
Like if you like Don't if you don't The simplest of choices You will or you won't Poems or stories Or something to sing A host of one-liners If climbing's your thing Personally I like Pieces that...
I hit my write number 100,. And posted it into my feed,. I was told by the Lee, congrats but no slack,. So it seems of this poem, he needs,. Thank you, I say,. A smiley or two,. In poetry style,.
I have, in my Opuss 'Continuation of 100th Opuss Idea" (which disappointingly nobody has read yet, despite the immense popularity of it's prequel!) suggested that Adam Neilson (the gentleman that...
Poetry in motion. Minus the commotion. The perfect magic potion. A simple little notion. A calming, soothing lotion. To part this brooding ocean. Because poetry's emotion. When poetry's in motion.
Dear Opuss I have no time to stop and play, pesky deadlines - go away. I'm try my best to draft a line, It won't be great, it will be mine.
If there's no one around to read a word, It just a ink on a page, naught If there's someone to read it, It's not the writer's word.
Riddle me this Riddle me that Who does love This little noisy cat. Wrapped in black Buttons on the screen Your the puss That makes my face gleam.
@bryanrobertheap mate thank you. When I get there, it's this piece I shall come back to! And you've bagged a first, never have I received a man poem before! My thanks again sir. 😊
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