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Mourning

Perhaps I've missed something,
Where is the mistress of the King?
I'm saddened,
Truly also a little maddened,
I don't see the point,
Have we all been smoking a joint?

Beautiful words.

Isn't that why we are here?
I don't want any writer to disappear,
These words, these windows to our soul,
A way to help our lives have control,
Every opinion valid,
We're a potty old bunch, like a mixed fruit salad...
But now, we seemed to have lost our dark fairy,
An Opuss fruit salad without its cherry?

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (44)

All over some stupid Dinosaur picture. ASCII art at that. ( Yes that's correct, ASCII, not how the others have spelt it, shaking my head ) it's not about stupid pictures. The fucking post was about the poem anyway! I don't know. In the words of Slipknot, I push my fingers into my eyes It's the only thing that slowly stops the ache But it's made of all the things I have to take Jesus it never ends, it works it's way inside If the pain goes on I'm not going to make it. AND YES I COPY'N'PASTED THAT LAST BIT!

@puffy1980 Well done. I truly dont care about acii art. Its the words that matter on opuss.

@naaviie nice one nic x

@puffy1980 - I know, it's completely RIDICULOUS.

@iPuss indeed it is. Tis a lot of old bollocks. Now someone truly talented is hurt and most likely gone. Very sad day for Opuss

@iPuss @leelee101 @puffy1980 - very sad ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ’”

Too true sadly

@puffy1980 I really think its all down to jelousey.

@naaviie very sad. If it had been a piece of her work which had been called in to question then I could vaguely understand it. But a fucking stupid picture my 4 year old son wouldn't be proud of? Fuck off. What makes it worse is the post pointing it out is now ranking number one today! WTF is going on!!

@puffy1980 good that you mentioned the author of those words tho isn't it!!!!!!!!!!!! I couldn't give a monkeys what it was, point is, everybody commented saying: wow that pic must of taken ages ect ect and she didn't once mention she copied it or where it came from, fact! She had over 50+ likes and more comments, so plenty of opportunity to say something. Someone else worked hard at making the dino pic, a little credit goes a long way.

@iPuss agreed

@smellyfingers @puffy1980 A little loyalty goes alot longer SHE appologised before you publically turned on her

@smellyfingers I get your point bud. I truly do. But isn't it about the words not the picture? The post I mean. I don't want to start a flame war, but WTF. :(

@iPuss @puffy1980 @smellyfingers - ok, she made a mistake, we're only human. And all friends here, she has apologised, we forgive her, I see no need for her to leave.

@iPuss I didn't turn on her...did I? I didn't mean too if I did. Been up since 4am on 2 hours sleep, so maybe I miswrote something...

@puffy1980 I meant fingers.... Hes turned real vicious towards me

@iPuss @puffy1980 @naaviie for sure 100% agree. Her post comments were mainly for the pic, lol. Anyways I have made a post, I apologised as I don't want her to leave, maybe she should of made a sorry post too instead of walking away, I don't know! We all make mistakes, learn from it and move on. I truly hope she comes back.

@naaviie agreed no need for her to leave...and sorry for hijacking the thread...and sorry if it seems like I'm against her...I truly am not! I think I'm gonna go have a sleep

@iPuss my dog is loyal, if it shots on my carpet, I'll give him what for, still love him tho as he will me. X

@puffy1980 No its not that hun I was pointing out that by the time everyone made it public she had already appologised. Somone then went on to spread it about . I think out of friendship it would have been loyaler to not do that but what ever. Acording to that same guy im a laughing stock

@puffy1980 @iPuss @smellyfingers - I don't want this to get personal. Obviously we should always give credit to things that aren't ours, but then we're all human... ๐Ÿ˜” mistakes happen.

@naaviie @iPuss @smellyfingers I say draw a line, have a beer and a kip...before I confuse myself even more and my brain explodes

@puffy1980 - you dont seem against her at all! Have a nice nap ๐Ÿ˜Š @smellyfingers - I agree, true friends tell eachother when they go wrong and still love eachother. @iPuss you're not a laughing stock.

@puffy1980 ๐Ÿปโ˜• I agree!

@naaviie True friends dont splash it all over like newspapers they do it quiet in privat

@iPuss similarly friends do NOT take screen shots of private chats on kik and show them to other "friends" behind the other friends back!! So, give me all your hate ipuss, blame me all you want, I'm a grown man, maybe you should act like a grown up too?

@iPuss @smellyfingers - how can we make this all better guys? There is really no point in fighting.

@smellyfingers those screen shots are showing your true colours. Every one sees it. I dont care if im a laughing stock. I care about people. Truley end of. I once cared about you till you were horrid to me when i needed you.

@iPuss then I will agree to disagree with you ipuss. I still love you and you will realise one day. I wish you well xx

This is a great post even if it's sad her work was very talented I don't know you all well enough to comment I just think she apologised more then enough on that @flygirl10 post and there was no need to carry it on with nasty posts that my opinion anyway

@DamianBlack I agree.

@DamianBlack @naaviie some of those posts are alittle naughty, even if the language used isn't...if that makes sense. Maybe @Seamonster should step in, either closing the tread or deleting it. I dunno. Not my call

@puffy1980 - which ones? If on this thread I can delete them.

@naaviie no no no the fly10 one!! Lol

@puffy1980 - oh yes, I'm not sure I want to look.๐Ÿ˜ฃ

@naaviie I wouldn't. It's all just kinda sad, :(

@puffy1980 oh dear ๐Ÿ˜ข

It makes me sad )':

@HeatherAnne me too ๐Ÿ˜ข

I'm back thanks for the post no need but thanks

@aleishagayle20 - I'm just glad it's over with. ๐Ÿ’š

@naaviie yeah okay

@aleishagayle20 I'm around if you want to chat. ๐Ÿ’š

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