There once was a lad named Flynn,
Who often smelt like a bin,
His best friend was called Kevin,
Who often smelt like a pumpkin,
His girlfriend was called Emlyn,
Who often smelt like a fishes fin,
They all played the violin,
But Kevin gave up and put it in the bin,
In Halloween they all dressed like a pumpkins.
Hehe. The end.
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@cherrypopicecream oh good. Look forward to it. Have a look at @sjw's one for an example of the structure. 👍
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