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Remember Me...

Remember how
with words I loved you

I am no more of
this world

Only in dreams
can I visit you

I am
wandering in the land of shades

I kiss your
cheeks through each tear of rain

Age did not
condemn me

I was never
at home with this era

I was a
warrior without a war

A Spartan
without Sparta

An
immortal....mortalised

I am the
fading sunset over distant hills

I am the
fleeting shadow cast by lonely clouds

I call you
with the sweet chorus of early sunrise

I embrace
you with the warm summer mists

I see
you....unseen in the half light of the forest

I am the
taste of the breeze at your face

I am the
glimmer at dawn

I am the
shimmer across the stillness of the lake

I am the
scent of your memory

I am bound
by the pain in your heart

I am the
glistening star on a chill winters night

I am the
essence of your courage when alone

I lay with
you...until dawn draws me from you

I am the
distant murmur in the howling wind

My moments
with you...were as fresh as summer snow

I can dwell
only in your past...wherein your heart I still lay..

Marcvs
Another very talented friend who died recently, we miss him! 

crowncottage

@crowncottage

Granny enjoying new technology.

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Amazing piece πŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸβœ¨πŸ‘

Great writing! Love it 😊😘

@gazplend @smellyfingers thank you, his family will be pleased that you like it. I love it too! πŸ˜₯

Beautifully written πŸ‘πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜˜

@Fly10 thanks! 😽

Awesome πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

Beautiful Linda. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw @leelee101 thank you both! 😽😽

Oh Linda...I fell in love with this....perfectly pure and wondrous...love love love it!!

@misslittleDHP thank you! I think he was a great talent, it's very sad he has gone. πŸ˜₯

❀

@Engel 😽😽

Awwww so sorry for you xc

@lonelynutmeg98 thanks 😽

I'm sorry about you losing your friend 😒 he was a very talented writer.

Did he sign his work as Marcvs? A latinised name isn't something you see everyday, so I'm being curious πŸ’—

@IndiaSparrow thank you. Yes, hopefully his daughter will join Opuss and post more. He was talented as a writer and also was an amazing artist!

@IndiaSparrow yes, if his family agree, I will write more about his extraordinary life, but I need to ask them first!

@IndiaSparrow about the name I mean. ☺

@crowncottage brilliant, sorry didn't mean to pry or anything, I was just curious :P

@IndiaSparrow not at all, I am glad you are interested! ☺

@siwinfield I am glad you have read and liked this! 😽

@SiWinfield I am very pleased you have found and liked this post! 😽

Oh what a wonderful poet. I am sorry that such sad circumstances caused you to write it x

*poem

@anniegx yes, me too. You realise that I didn't write it, he did? πŸ™

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