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Drown

She popped a pill
Then took two more
To drown out
The knocking on her door

Her fingers tingled
Her body light
She slowly drifted
Into the night

No more pain
No more sorrow
No more knocking
No more tomorrow

A cry for help?
Not this time
A knock too many
A hidden crime

No other way out
No other way in
No other to help
No other but him

She popped a pill
Then took two more
He destroyed her heart
He destroyed her soul

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Sad hun 😒

Very sad and heartbreaking Hun, but a fitting way to have it written πŸ‘πŸ’

@leelee101 @sara_lou it's fictional. But I've seen some shit in a former job. πŸ˜”πŸ˜‚

That's so sad πŸ˜ͺ

@eddie12309 a lovely piece, if a heartbreaking topic

Sad but beautifully written πŸ‘πŸ’—πŸ˜˜

That was supposed to be a πŸ˜” not aπŸ˜‚ in my comment. Only just noticed. πŸ‘†πŸ‘†πŸ‘†

@Irrational_Kimmi @sjw thankyou both. It's quite a tricky subject to portray. 😘😘

You are very talented! Followed πŸ˜‰ By the way this poem was kinda creepy πŸ’«

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