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eddie12309
eddie12309 • 677 followers

No no
No no
Noooooo!

How how
How how
How?

Why why
Why why
Why?

When
when
When?

So many
Questions
Burning in
her head

What went
wrong, was I
no good
in bed?

Sick in
the
stomach

Feeling out
of
control

The
downward
spiral
begins

A heart
broken,
trust
stole

Was it
worth
it?

This
sinking
feeling

A time
of
grief

No funeral
no
healing

You had
a choice
in life
You
crossed
a
boundary

You
chose
yourself
and
Infidelity

#betrayal #emotional-poetry #general #heartbreak #relationship-drama
eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (13)

gazplend
gazplend
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:16 PM

Very good! Love the spacing,adds to the words! Your clever and hot! 😉

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:19 PM

@gazplend why thank you sir. Hides her head in embarrassment. ☺☺😘

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:21 PM

@Stablish thanks for the repost😘😊

gazplend
gazplend
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:22 PM

@eddie12309 hold your head high hot stuff! And don't call me sir! Handsome will do! 😘

Stablish
Stablish
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:25 PM

@eddie12309 Your welcome, really well written, loved your spacing too👍

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:32 PM

@gazplend "hot stuff" like that. MY have to write about that later. Sir Booty. Lol😄😄😄😄

gazplend
gazplend
Jul 2, 2012 at 12:34 PM

@eddie12309 haha,yeh let's hear more about your 'hot stuff' rhymes well with 'in the buff' to start you off! 😍😘

leelee101
leelee101
Jul 2, 2012 at 1:06 PM

@eddie12309 great stuff hun. Well written and love the structure. 👍😘😘

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jul 2, 2012 at 2:11 PM

@leelee101 thank you. And for the repost. 😘💋

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Jul 2, 2012 at 2:35 PM

This is brilliant and you capture completely the raw emotions of infidelity...❤💔❤💔

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jul 2, 2012 at 2:45 PM

@misslittleDHP thank you. Sad isn't it😓😓💔

Fly10
Fly10
Jul 2, 2012 at 3:05 PM

Powerful portrayal lady😔💔

eddie12309
eddie12309
Jul 2, 2012 at 3:19 PM

@Fly10 thanks. Like the new pic!👍😊

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