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The Visitor

My demon came to visit today
I didn't think she'd be here long but looks like shes going to stay

She un packed her bag with the usual items, sorrow, regret, helplessness, guilt
But she brought another one I hadn't seen for quite some time, jealousy, in a beautifully dark hand made quilt

A sinking feeling overwhelmed me at the sight of those green eyes
I have no rival, so why has she brought it, is it for my eventual demise?

Self esteem at an all time low, her blanket of resentment falls over me
A covering I struggle to find release from, would acknowledgement and attention banish thee?

The demon detaches me from everyday life, making it hard for me to cope
Sometimes when she's angry she'll pack a length of rope

She makes me feel cloudy and grey even though outside the sun is shining
Does she have a fairy tale ending, doubt it, my cloud has no silver lining

I say to her I'll put the kettle on
If your plans are to stay
But she opens the door, let's in the light and leaves jealousy for another day

It's amazing what a cup of tea will do

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (12)

Excellent! 💗💐💗here's to excising our demons!

Great stuff hun. Have you sent her packing? ☕👍😘❤

@leelee101 morning☕☕☕💤thanks for repost. 💚

@eddie12309 have some more ☕ hunny 👍😘❤

Love this...I think your demon may have a sister who's with me at the moment....cup of tea ain't working tho😂😂

@misslittleDHP ha. Normally running up the downs followed by a nice cups does the trick. But I didn't think writing about running would add to the morbidity of it all. Lol. Hope the sister books a holiday soon!👿👿😂

Aggghhh nice cuppa

Very good! I wonder at times about the distinction between jealousy and envy. Nasty twins, those two!

Gotta love tea ☕☕☕ ace work!!

@VikingHorn yes it's a fine line. @naaviie thank you 😘

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@Burrfoot thanks for repost. That was an u fortunate day I wrote this one. 😔

Sorry for bringing it back, I associated with this one 💪

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