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~Unspeakable~

There's a place where you can go to nobody can find
It's depravity and evil all rolled into one
It's a pit of self-loathing second to none

Locked away behind iron clad doors
The key to its exposure you don't have any more
Too dark to pass through the gates of hell
Stuck in limbo the moment you fell

The fire and torture burning in your head
It's a path to destruction that you carefully tread
The craving of corruption banging on the door
Anguish and torment you can't take anymore

Echoing and pleading, you want to set your old friend free
To release the foul beast, and it's insanity
Its the antipathy and exquisiteness of tainted killing
Ridding the world of its blatant sinning

You may not have the key, but the door handle you can turn
Open your mind, release him and let it burn
A rush of ambivalence spreads through your core
"Just one more kill then I'll close the door"

But its an addiction, in your dissolute and hideous mind
That's why they've locked the door, thrown away the key, for your unspeakable crimes

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (18)

@naaviie 😊😱

Wow 😱😱😱 deeeep... Love it tho! 👍❤😘

😱😱😱 mummy!!! 😰

@leelee101 @chy thank you. Remember in Opuss.... No one can hear your screams 😱😱😱

@eddie12309 😳😰😰😰😰

Wow!!! That's awesome!!!! 😱😱👏👏

@eddie12309 😱😱😱👍😂😂😂❤

Love this deep and dark with words I can't pronounce ☺😜😘

Am I the only one who was playing the part of Evil in this?! 👿👿👿😄😄 @eddie12309 @leelee101 @chy @naaviie

@MrsS ooooo you evil one!!! 😱😱😱

@naaviie 😉 😄😄

@MrsS 😱😱😱😱

@smellyfingers @MrsS @naaviie oooo thank you for all your creepy comments and lovely reposts👿

It was good, reminded me a bit of purgatory...

A fantastic write...thoroughly enjoyed it👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

@misslittleDHP thank you and for the lovely repost. Glad you enjoyed it. 👍💚

@eddie12309 Loved it!!! Some great words used in that 😃👍👏👏👏

@Weirdwolf thank you. As long as you can pronounce them then your one up on @smellyfingers 👍

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