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Who's Afraid Of The Dark ?

The darkness envelopes me as I lay here awake
Every sound is magnified by my insomnia
Tick tock tick tock from the clock
Like an echoing abyss

The darkness fabricates shadows into devilish silhouettes
Every one staring at me without eyes
Penetrating deep within

The darkness unnerves me, conjures desolate thoughts
The shadows still stare, the baby stirs
Hummmmmmmmm
The monitor stirs to life

The darkness conceals me from that menacing presence, felt but not seen
A sinister sound reverberates through the speaker
"Rock a bye baby on the tree top"
Tick tock tick tock from the clock
He's here, the chill of helplessness spreads over me

The darkness hinders me as I race up the stairs
Her innocent sound echoes in the silence
"Rock a bye baby on the tree top"
The silhouette stands waiting.....

Tick tock tick tock from the clock.....

"When the wind falls the baby will drop....."

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Felt that taunt too 😨

Ooo that's creepy. A true nightdwellers piece hunny 👍❤😘😱👏

Really really eerie....love it😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

A crossover piece -nice! A great creepy write here. :-)

@Burrfoot @leelee101 @misslittleDHP @wolfie thank you. Last one before I'm off. 😱😃😘

@misslittleDHP forgot to say thank you for the repost. 🍸🍸🍸

@eddie12309 have a lovely time hunny 👍❤😘

Woah! Freaky 😱😱😱 Great write 😚👻

Arghhhhhh, meant to Repost this, but pressed 'report as spam' instead - sorry!!!!!! 😖 @seamonster !!!

@MrsS lol! You woke me up💤💤💤

Awesome 👍😄

@Seamonster Wakey Wakey!!! 😂😂😂 Emergency! Offensive material!! Heeeeeeelp, somebody call the Opuss Police!!!! 😂😂😂

😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 scary one to end on!!! Have a fab holiday Ed!! 💚💚💚✈⛵🌄🌈

Awesome piece! ❤

Awesome piece- love it! Chillingly dark and surreal write, great use of onomatopoeia!! 😉

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