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Too Far Gone (The Dark Hole)

I feel myself plunging in to the depths
No one can hear me scream, or break my fall
I am falling alone and I am scared
I can see my family in the light up above they try to save me but I am too far gone
I have tried to save myself but I am powerless to stop it
I don't want to be this way I want to be happy and carefree
But my mind won't allow this
So I cry in the dark in my deep dark hole but no one can hold me no one can kiss me and assure me things will be alright
They cannot reach me
I am too far gone

emma18

@emma18

I'm sad :((

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Sounds a bit like m y opuss abyss . Similar feelings .

@salettesiao this describes how I have been feeling for about 4 years this is a good way for me to voice how I feel and not be judges for being mad

Not at all . For me it was just a moment of unconsciousness

@salettesiao mine describes a state if depression

Yes . I could feel you were lost and confused

You are a pretty girl but you have a sad look

@salettesiao sadness, depression is hard to overcome

You are so young , full of prospects . Shake your sadness off and start anew . Life is full of joy and don't miss it

The mind forbids us to be happy .

@salettesiao I only wish this was possible I have struggled with this for about 4-5 years it's very hard to cope with

When there is life there is hope . You are the only one to decide if you want tolive happily . Get some friends ang go out and enjoy .