I do all this posting, they look like shite
But everyone keeps liking the words that I write
Don't know what's wrong with my mood these days
I don't appreciate what I spell or the words I say
This sour mood won't go, it's bringing me down
So depressed, I wear a frown
I'm mad at myself all the time
I try to fill the space with lousy rhymes
But it's not enough the truth eats through
Nobody loves me, not even you
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Comments & Feedback (9)
Agree with @RichWithey you can get through it, maybe it's the acrostics that's doing it!? Try looking through the everything feed there are some gems tucked away that might help if it's inspiration your lacking 😘
Yes, I've been feeling like that so have just taken a huge break and am now back and enjoying it all again! 😁
@sjw thanks😊 I'm usually checking in the everything feed. I think it's just one of those days. It'll pass😊
@Janflower yeah I hope it passes other wise I'll try to take a break. Glad to have you back on opuss again🎉
Hey chin up, you'll get through this, muses like to play games occasionally, don't let it get you down. 😘💐 I'm also in similar thinking with @sjw and @RichWithey take it easy, chill, do things you enjoy. ☺✨
@RichWithey @sjw @Janflower @yikici thank you all so much for the kind words. Feeling much better now. Hung out with my big sis, had a little social interaction, just what I needed for a pick me up 😊👍☕😘😘
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