B reathe again, breathe again,
R each out for true love.
E mbrace this new feeling,
A nother wants to love you
T o build a life together.
H old onto that joy,
E mbrace this love and breathe again.
A joy to be experienced,
G ive it your all,
A nd you'll be an example;
I nspiring for all.
N ever forget to breathe again.
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#100days. I want a break away from myself. I wish I was more confident. I wish I'd push myself to perform. Instead of assuming I'll crash and burn. It's been so long since I've been up there.
#100days @madhatter. Sometimes we just need to cry. Into a pillow or someone's shoulder. Tears can come from anywhere, flying by. And the pain that brings them is as heavy as a boulder.
#100days In this time of emptiness In this manic depression I'll seek my solace Receive my chest compression As I fall to the darkness As I wait for dawn I'll seek my solace I will not mourn.
#100days This can't be it for my life This can't be everything There has to be more One day I will soar I hide from the night I have to break away from this madness I have to put it right.
#100days Break away, break free, from negatives that people say, or even things that you think too, no-one else can, do it for you..
#100days @madhatter The image bounces back a different way than it came. Ripples in the water may distort, but the light remains the same. Beauty and serenity are admired in this scene.
We are grey. Darkness black as coal, Darkness in his eyes. Darkness in his soul, Darkness in his cries. But we are grey. Whiteness white as dove, Whiteness in her plight.
#100days @madhatter. I just want to break away. From all this sadness and decay. I just want to dance alone. With no one watching to moan. I just want to do what's right.
@leelee101 Thank you so much hun! Everybody here is so encouraging.π The 100 days challenge is really making me think. I'm just trying out different styles and ideas. I am just so very pleased people like my stuff π
@jojo72 but not to the exclusion of all else, mind... Go on, admit it. My names jojo and I'm a functioning Opuss addict... β€ππ
@leelee101 it's true! Although not always sure about the functioning bit π. Off to my sister's for the weekend so may my have time to post much. I am sure I won't get the shakes ... pretty sure anyway π
Another superb write.. πππΉ I maybe in danger of being wee bit pedantic here? however if you are trying to spell breathe downwards, take a wee look @ 2nd letter? Perhaps a word beginning with R you think?.. Just to make you work?ππxx
@jojo72 goin..?? U mean gone?? U been 'gone' a long time dear lolππ now it's perfik another brilliant write from yours truly! Well done!!ππππΉπΉπΉX
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