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A Rescued Horse Says Thank You

Inspired by HeatherAnne's poem.

The lush green grass beckons me.
A thing I never thought to see.
The only touch I ever felt,
Was whip and sting; a leather belt.

This pasture where I now do lie,
With forelock long to still the fly.
With tail brushed and coat a shining;
Ah such sweet taste for my dining.

A life of horror, a life of pain,
Until a kindly being came,
To rescue me from dark despair.
Who let me know that she did care.

This angel made of all things kind,
My nerves and starts she did not mind.
A soothing word, a guiding hand
She led me to this promised land.

Not sure my fears will ever leave,
Although I now have time to grieve.
But now at least I know I can
Trust in my savour, HeatherAnne.

jojo72

@jojo72

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@HeatherAnne. Hope you don't mind 😚

Aw good stuff jojo 👍❤😘

@leelee101 thanks babes. @HeatherAnne did all the work though, I just added the happy ending 😘

Gorgeously sad, happy and hopeful in one write😢😃😊😘

@misslittleDHP thanks babes and for the RP @leelee101 mucho gracias (spl) for the RP. 😍

Awe, beautiful 🐎💚🐎💚

@naaviie mwa! Thank you sweetie :)

@jojo72 you're a bit hard on yourself jojo. Sure heather may have inspired, but it's your piece, and it's a goodie! ❤❤❤

@leelee101 I shall try harder to take compliments graciously. Just not used to people liking my stuff. Only ever shared them with my husband, who is hopelessly biased, and one other friend, who isn't much more objective :/. Takes a bit of getting used to 😊

Great follow up 😊

@HeatherAnne So glad you liked ☺

@jojo72 echo leelee truly brilliant!& quite tightly don't b hard on yourself!of course your friends & hubby will be hopelessly biased😏❕it is nice to get the thoughts of those who don't know us👍well done🌹❤

@qualified2dream Thank you sweetie. Appreciate your support, as always. 💛

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