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Beach

Standing on the beach
Water at my toes
Aroma of the salty sea
Drifting past my nose
Sounds of children playing
Castles in the sand
Lovely blue and cloudless sky
The ice cream seller's stand
Sun is shining brightly
Shades reduce the glare
Gentle breeze against my shirt
And ruffling my hair
It's idyllic perfection
Finest place to be
Only one thing missing
That's you, right here, with me

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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Awww sweet I like it 😊

@aleishagayle20 thanks hun. Left the soppy tap running I'm afraid! πŸ˜‰

@leelee101 hahaha that's okay mine are a bit emotional lately 😳 need to get the dark stuff back haha

Simple and sweet. Like it! :)

@ZuperZed thank u 😊

Ah this poked my sentimental heart. "oh I just want to be beside the seaside..." πŸ’š

@naaviie where winged donkeys take flight.. πŸ˜‰

@naaviie thanks for the repost hun 😊

@leelee101 - ek the temptation of that image is almost to much to bare!!

Awwww, I lo

Sorry. I'll try again. Awwww I love seaside days, reminds me of good times :P

@leelee101 really like this, mate keep the tap running. ☺

@naaviie get to it hun! 😊

I can really imagine this :D you chose such vivid words.

@Stablish thanks bro and for the repost. Tap turned off for a while, busy bee tonight. Back on later tho! 😊

@IndiaSparrow thanks hunπŸ˜„

@leelee101 😝

@Mizzywoo thank u πŸ˜„

@leelee101 Great stuff πŸ˜‰

Lovely! Sunshine & the sea πŸ’“πŸ’“

@Fly10 @kivihe thank you both. 😊

@leelee101 no problem hun, I can feel the sunshine and the smell of the sea when I read ur poem 😍

@kivihe then my work is done! X

@leelee101 lol 🐳🐳🌟

@leelee101 sir soppy nicely done :-)

@smellyfingers thank you. I have left the soppy tap running today I will admit... 😊

@smellyfingers thank you for the repost

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