So then, girls, its come to this
But I'm not here to take the piss
Rather to congratulate
Your verbal volleys were so great
What a way to pass the time
Slinging cheese and pies in rhyme
I will remind you though, you lost
But our victory came at a cost
The ending stained the colour red
'Cos all four characters are dead!
Thanks again to @VikingHorn
Whose decision of good sense was born
There wasn't even a single bribe
(though mince pies he did imbibe...)
Allow Jack and I a cheesy grin
To celebrate an epic win
Always a pleasure, never a chore
Our battle's entered Opuss lore
And I'm sure we'll do it all again
Just give me time to buy a pen
It's not as easy as you think
When you're running out of ink!
So well done girls it was a blast
Even though you finished last
I have to say you are the best
Now lay those hero pants to rest
And when the time has come to pass
New characters will be high class
So when you're ready, give us a shout
But watch out, watch out! Knickerninja's about...
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Comments & Feedback (37)
Tish tosh - no one can beat me and D! We killed you! Dead! Have you never seen spiderman, or batman, or any superhero film? 😜😜😜
@naaviie we'll give them the benefit of the doubt 😉 really we won cos they're dead and I have no recollection of dying myself 😝 just stay away from my knickers!!!! Well played by all 😘😘😘😘
@naaviie @Delilah ah...the penny drops...Dan came down on the side of evil! He had us reach from the grave and pull you to your doom! 👿 Mwahahaha! However, you are superheroes, and if you have the power of resurrection, I'm sure Daring D and Notorious Nic can live again... I know your game, you just wanna face off against the Knickerninja! And you know I can't resist those hero pants... 😍😍😍😂😂😂❤
I knew dan was just an evil alias of yours! Of course evil would cheat! Should've expected that! 😒 I think the adventures of the knickerninja sound much more entertaining than this fraud! 😜😜
@naaviie I knew it! You two just can't resist having your hero pants investigated by the Knickerninja! Ah so! 😂😂😂❤💋
@naaviie I didn't know whether you were sick from the cheese or from the baby! Have you even taken a test? 😂😂😂 and we shall resurrect to go back to our D-Den...I'm cool with Doctor Who so he can take us back in time to a place when life was simple, when there was no moral grey area, when it was just Nic and D... 😉
@Delilah - D that seems damn near perfect, can we go back to exercising chickens and saving cats from trees? Plus I'm too young to be a mum! 😝😝
@naaviie phew, so all is back to normal and this was just a nightmare....wait... Where'd all this cheese come from....Eastenders drumroll 😱😱
@naaviie @Delilah @leelee101 I think you misread me, Lee. I didn't mean that you guys reached from the grave to kill them, but through you're demise exposed their dark sides. They beat you by diving to more evil, faster! The girls won, no doubt about that, but are they still good? That's up for debate. Some of us like bad girls better, anyway. 😉
@naaviie Yes, indeed, which makes the tragic tale of your corruption, and over-zealous self destruction all the more universal! 😘
@VikingHorn - I hope you're coming to the D-Den, we're all having a party to celebrate - @Delilah's made cupcakes, I've got the cookies and beer, @MelchiorJ13's got the rabies jabs... I'll make sure lee brings more beer... 😜
@VikingHorn I'm always happy! Here's the extra 🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻 do you think we'll need more? 😂
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