Torn, ripped at the seams
A life that once was shared
Full of broken dreams
That cannot be repaired
You just wouldn't try
Walking in my shoes
And couldn't see that I
Had it all to lose
Tell me time will heal
The hurt that still remains
An ever turning wheel
A lover's scars and pains
Cover up my wounds
Try to hide the sting
You may have gone away
But I remember everything
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Comments & Feedback (15)
@Fly10 you know, when someone says they can relate to a piece like this, I'm not sure whether to thank them or not! Obviously connecting somewhere... So I'll say thank you anyway! 😘
@leelee101 I think relatable is a good thing, as means your writing has touched someone, somehow. So to rephrase, a heartbreaking, relatable but excellent piece of work! (smiling😁)x
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