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The Twilight of a Champion

A single indiscretion's brought me
To my fate
You gave all and everything
How did I repay
With a swollen raw affection
Someone else's way
Intravenous poison coursing
Through my veins
Left a mark that won't come out
The filthiest of stains
My twilight falls around me
And your course is just
Desperation tells me that there's
Only dust
The hands that held and kept you
Safe from harm
Hands guilty of holding
A fatalistic charm
Oh these hands that wrought the agony
As all becomes undone
Will be the hands that pull the trigger
of
this
gun

Title, and two lines
From
'Twilight of a Champion'
by The The

leelee101

@leelee101

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@MelchiorJ13 a slab of gloom for you Jack...

Well captured πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@naaviie thanks hun, thought I may have gone a bit too low. ❀ Hey ho...πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@MelchiorJ13 thanks for reposting jack πŸ‘πŸ»

Well captured πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š (not being very original, am I? 😜) Really great piece, though, perfectly captures the essence of depression πŸ˜‰

@MelchiorJ13 ok for 'despair' then? πŸ‘

@leelee101 any time! πŸ˜‰ Ack, stupid autocorrect!! Yes, it's brilliant for despair! πŸ˜„πŸ˜‰πŸ˜œπŸ‘πŸ‘

@MelchiorJ13 ok good. Cheers mate πŸ‘πŸ»

@MelchiorJ13 Oi you πŸ‘ˆ!

@naaviie hey! Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery! (and imitation πŸ˜‚) 😜

@MelchiorJ13 - pufffttt you're going to get it mister!

@naaviie who me? πŸ‘Ό

@naaviie @MelchiorJ13 haha! πŸ˜‚ FIGHT!! πŸ˜³πŸ˜‚

@MelchiorJ13 πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ these are not for hugs! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@naaviie haha! Give him these πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š too! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@leelee101 😱😱😱 TRAITOR!!!!! @naaviie 😱😭😭😭

@leelee101 @MelchiorJ13 πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ let's get him and his little cat too! πŸ±πŸ”«πŸ˜±

@naaviie 😱 that's it, missy!!! What next, my Gran? I'm sick of cheese though, how about mr noodle? πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@MelchiorJ13 πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I know all you eat is noodles and cheese - but really! What if Kimmi sees "MrNoodleβ„’" πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@naaviie πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ MrNoodleβ„’ πŸ˜‚πŸ˜œ all I really eat now is noodles, haha, I've gone off cheese 😜

@naaviie let's eat the cat, we can floss at the same time with all that fur... πŸ±πŸ΄πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@MelchiorJ13 - I never liked cheese anyway! That's why it's for badies! 😱 @leelee101 veggies don't eat cats! ... 😱 πŸ’šπŸ±πŸ’š protect the cats for Lee!! πŸ˜±πŸ˜‚

**FROM Lee 😣

@naaviie πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Ooooo very good this πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰

@glen thank you mate πŸ‘ and some 🍻 for the RP. Cheers! πŸ‘

Fabulous my sweet πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@misslittleDHP thanks Kim ❀ and a πŸ’‹ for the RP, appreciate that πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sjw thanks for reposting hunny, appreciate that πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Brilliant.

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@RichWithey cheers Rich appreciated. πŸ‘ As is the RP sir 🍻

@wolfie thank u nik. πŸ‘ RP most appreciated sir πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜‰

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