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A Dream Goodbye

It's been so long
Since I heard from my dad
It's been a journey
To a place called Sad

I tried to be there
I tried to be strong
It was not enough
Am I just wrong?

I was pushed aside
In your darkest time
To my offer of comfort
You all were blind

I then pulled away
I emotionally detach
I never did belong
A bitter true fact

So time has moved on
No word from you
I carry on with life
As good people do

I know not
If you're alive or dead
No one has written
And nothing's been said

Then last night
You came into my dream
You looked healthy
Cured it would seem

Your hair was brown
Ruffled and thick
You had rosy cheeks
No more looking sick

Your little pot belly
Had returned once more
Not gaunt and thin
Like you were before

You looked happy
Not downcast and beat
Seeing you again
Was a real treat

I don't know whether
You had come to say hello
Or if it's a goodbye
Telling me it's time to let go

©Kim Brown 15th January 2013

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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That's a really beautiful/sad piece hun. ❤😢 Hope you can work things out hun. 💪💪💪💪💪😘

@leelee101 thanking you my sweet...but I really don't think there's any more I can do...I wrote letters...text...and still nothing...then I had this dream last night and had to write it out...feels better for doing so 😘😘😘

So sorry Kim....I know this has been ongoing heartache for you. A beautifully expressive piece 😔👏👏x

Sending you lots of hugs, I'm glad writing about it has helped 😔 this is a beautiful write 👏👏👏💐

Indeed it's really sad, but a beautiful poem, full of emotions. Be strong !! 💝💝💝💝. ☺😊

@Fly10 @sjw @yasmin777 thanking you my sweets for the supportive comments...means a lot...❤❤❤🌹🌹🌹🌹....I THANKYOU for any RP's 💐💝💐

@RichWithey @chickgamer...mwah my sweets for the kind RP's 🌹💐💝

Touching piece keep your head up and don't get discouraged

💪💪 a heartfelt piece I'm glad I didn't miss in all the k'fuffle.. Hope you're ok my friend

@FriendToAnimals I intend to Hun...thanks for the kind words 😘😘😘

Awww Kim 😢😢 big huge hug coming ur way 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😘

@Burrfoot I'm good my sweet...thanks for asking...there's nothing more I can do and I've got good at emotional detachment over the years, so this old friend to me has been helping me through...I am grateful for your kind words Hun...it means an awful lot ❤😘💪💪

@misslittleDHP any time :)

@patdolan83 @Burrfoot ...mwahs for the RP's 😘😘😘

@misslittleDHP I know the feeling.. I have many boxes that if ever burst open, I'm fooked! 😉 sometimes the only way huggy

@sarahgamal thanks gorgeous...your hug is gratefully received 🌹❤😘

@misslittleDHP Big hugs winging their way to you, much love too. Beautifully written, sad and touching, hope you are ok. Am thinking of you and feel for some reason you will have an important dream tonight. I don't know where that came from, it just popped into my head! ✨🌟✨🌟sleep tight. All will seem better in the morning light. ✨🌟✨🌟

@sleepydragon awww bless you my sweet, that truly is kind of you. I was talking about my dad yesterday and I've since tried texting but still nothing. I honestly can't express how much your kind words mean lovely lady...big hugs for the RP and for your wonderful kindness 💪💪💪💪🌹💐💝✨😘

@misslittleDHP A pleasure indeed. I feel for you hun. ✨

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