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Addictions Inflictions

Looking at the sallow pale face
How ever did you get to this place?
Eyes so sunken with darken rings
Your eyes say a thousand things
Every contour of your bones
Loosely covered with ill fitted clothes
Your poor diet showing in your skin
God only knows what's going on within
Track marks tell the tales of your life
Like you've hacked yourself with a knife
The bruises cover every inch of you
Every place the needles been is blue
Your hair is lank, no more glossy sheen
Looking at you now, I wonder where you've been?
Your eyes of grey with a telltale black dot
Your pupils so tiny it's easy to spot
You once had a lovely perfect smile
Your teeth haven't been great for a while
So now you prefer to not smile at all
The voice of happiness no longer call
You patiently wait until your next fix
That will help you forget all of this

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (34)

👍and 😔 I've seen some addicts first hand in a job I did while studying. Drug addicts that is and what they'd do to get the money for the next hit is incredibly sad and beyond comprehension. Well done 💚

Powerful stuff 💗

💪 a vicious circle 😔

@eddie12309 my mother stole from me, and put mine and her own grandsons life in danger...but she just didn't care...it was very tough, scary and heartbreaking....I don't even want to know in depth what my mum did to get a fix!!😔😞

@PoppyA @Burrfoot thanks my sweets...I thought I got it off my chest the other day in one of my poems but obviously not!!😔😞

That's sad to here and I'm sure it's contributed to the person you are today. Your story is like those I've met and heard. 😔

@eddie12309 thanks my darling...it's def had an impact on my life!!😘😘😘

Very deep thoughts. Hope everything turns out ok for them...😔

Awesome write Kim. Sad tale, too often told I fear 😢👍❤

Really sad to read, addiction is so bad in so many ways. Hope it helped to write it up😘😘

@Stablish it has and does my sweet😘😘😘😘

@leelee101 @magicmilkshake thankayoooo my sweets😘😘😘

Powerful write! You deserve a massive virtual hug!! 😔💐💐💐💋

@misslittleDHP that's ok it's so sad to hear about though 😔🌺💐

@misslittleDHP Very well written. 👍

@sjw I feel soooooooooo much better now my sweet...THANKYOU 😘😘😘😘😘😘

@Weirdwolf thankayoooo muchly Hun 😘😘

Great writing!

@nikujagagirl thanks my lovely💚💚💚💚

@misslittleDHP You're welcome!

@Weirdwolf @sjw drinks all round for the reposts my sweets🍶🍸🍺☕

@Stablish mwah for the RP Hun 😘😘🌺🌻

@leelee101 hugs for the RP my sweet💪💪💪💪

@Burrfoot hugs for the kind repost hun💪💪💪💪

@eddie12309 a martini for the repost my sweet🍸🍸🍸🍸

@misslittleDHP oh that was ages ago. Bless you but us rather have champagne. 💃

@eddie12309 Bollinger no less....💛💙💛💙

Blummin heck, hugs all around 💚💚💚

@naaviie awww I feel better now my sweet🌹🌹🌹🌹

@misslittleDHP this is everything I see in a certain said someone and all I can feel is bad x lovely piece :')

@ponyo awww bless you my sweet...addiction is truly a living nightmare...not just for the addict but those close to them also....thanks for your comment my sweet...a flower to cheer you up 🌹🌹🌹🌹

@ponyo and some chocs for the repost my sweet💝💝

It's alright :') thankyou for the flowers ;) ☺💐

@ponyo my pleasure😃😃😃😃😃

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