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I saw him for the first time
Inside a darkened club
As the music echoed
I felt instant love

I'd never felt such passion
I wanted him into me
Hold me in his arms
Kissed until I can't see

Our eyes then connected
He stared with darken gaze
I began to feel light headed
I felt in a blissful daze

Oh my god...he's coming closer
How will I remain calm?
He stood before me smiling
At once I fell for his dark charm

He pressed himself into me
Then kissed me oh so hard
With him all my inhibitions
I willingly now discard

He has both my hands
Entwined within his grip
Kissing me with ferocity
I feel as reality slips

After that kiss, he leads the way
Takes me to a quiet spot
All the while staring at me
My goodness he is hot

No words were ever spoke
I just understood his thoughts
I understood what he wanted
Under his spell I was caught

He began to nuzzle my neck
I closed my eyes to enjoy
Then I felt passionate nips
I was his very own toy

With a deep and sultry whisper
He tells me what he's about to do
In the swirl of passion
I whisper back to him "I want you"

That's when I felt his bite
A delicious feeling no doubt
The pain was overcome
By the passionate cloud

He sucked the life from me
I was beginning to fade and die
"Come my darling" he smiled
In his arms he whispers "you're mine"

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (28)

Hot stuff 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

I was SO captivated by this sensuous and sultry poem, I also fell for his charms!👿😁😍👨💀♥💉♥

Vampire hawtness - Twilight has got nothing on this!!! 😊🔥

Fab fab fab. 💚💚💚

Oooo! 🔥🔥🔥 hot mama! 👍❤😘

@sarahgamal...mwah for the repost Hun 😘😘😘

@glen @eddie12309 @leelee101 thankayoooo my sweet peeps😘😘😘😘

@Irrational_Kimmi @michga I fell for this vamp...hook line and sinker..funny how our imagination just let's us fall into for a character...I might write a few more about him 😘😘😘😘😘

@leelee101 @michga @glen thanks Huns for the kind reposts🌻🌺🌻🌺🌻🌺

🌟👏👏👏🌟check our Edhum3's piece bite master. I think you guys are writing about the same guy😘😉

Loved it! <3

Oops! I mean his piece is called He Bites. Yours is bite master 😝

@ckahn I just read eds and yep we certainly could be writing about the same vamp!!❤💚❤💚❤

@paigeanne13 thanks my sweet💗💚💜

@ckahn mwah lovely lady for the repost Hun 🌹🌹🌹🌹

What are the chances 😳 😊😘👍💋

@Edhum3 your my Opussian kindred spirit...❤😘😃

@sjw...mwah mwah my sweet for the kind repost 💗💚💜💜💗💚

Awesome!! 😊😊

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@MrAlex @RichWithey THANKYOU you lovely gorgeous guys💋💋

@RichWithey @MrAlex a drink for the much appreciated reposts boys...🍺🍸🍺🍸

@misslittleDHP bottoms up! 😊🍻

@misslittleDHP brilliant I understood most of it bit I am only 12 Lolz but I have a good mind xx

@Livvi bless you....thanks for your comment my sweet💗💚💗

It's ok I do it because I know it makes you smile xx

@misslittleDHP forgot to tag you in it cx

@Livvi 😃😘😃😘😃😘

@misslittleDHP 😽😺😽😺😽

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