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Dear Dad..It's Me Again

Today I found out why you have not been in touch
You are seriously ill and I didn't even know, this sucks

On top of fighting the cancer, the chemo and radiotherapy
The last time we spoke, your concerns were all about me

You said you felt guilty for not coming up at all
But you were feeling better and that is why you called

You said given time you'd drive up in your car
I said only do so when you're ready, don't want you driving far

We talked a short while, you made some silly jokes
Thinking of that now brings a big lump to my throat

That was about 3 months ago I knew all wasn't right
To just show up at your home, this thought I had to fight

Then a while ago I'd written an Opuss about you dad
What happened next may make you think I'm mad

I was upstairs and thoughts of you swirled around my head
Then I thought I'd better turn the telly off before I go to bed

I walked down the stairs literally opened the door
The telly switched off by itself...my jaw hit the floor

I was so spooked I went to get my son to come and take a look
He could tell I was terrified, my face read like a book

It was then I knew within that something was very wrong
That dreaded sense of bad foreboding was just too very strong

I was too scared to phone your former work partner, whether he had heard anything at all
I just kept praying and hoping that one week, from you I'd get my call

I did consider writing you a letter, pleading and begging your dear wife
Whether I could see you, not to cause pain, upset or strife

Then I thought you won't need all that added worry and stress
I felt in limbo...what can I do?...it's all just one big mess

Then I asked my brother if he would mind calling your old workmate
For news of you, a long time I had to wait

Then this morning I finally get the news of just how ill you've been
You were even in the hospital for 8 days, it's like I'm in a bad dream

You are apparently home now, doing better than you was
But you won't ever be better again...no reason...just because

The cancer you are trying so very hard to fight
Has you in a vice, you are trying with all your might

So I'm no closer to seeing you or speaking with you for a chat
I suppose I need to toughen up and face the very real fact
That I will never see or hear from you again...it's over...that is that

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (29)

😰 beautifully touching babe

Aww my lovely that's so sad hope you're feeling ok? 😔😘

My thoughts and prayers are with you all

I have my quiet time now...had to get this off my chest once again...it's sad, shit, draining, frustrating all rolled into one blobby mess...I knew something was wrong so I'm glad I know for sure...it's just a waiting game now....but life goes on....thanks for the support my loves@aleishagayle20 @Delilah ....means a lot ....not meaning to bring you peeps down, just had to write this, makes me feel better :):)

Awwwww! Makes me want to cry! I'm

@misslittleDHP no we need to get this stuff off our chests sometimes it clears our heads so we can think again and it can be such a release hugs 😘

*I'm here if you need me! :'( my prayers are with you too

I can't think of a community more supportive than Opuss's. We've got your back ;)

This is heart-rending ... Thoughts are with you

@wolfie @MWBennett @IndiaSparrow @Delilah @aleishagayle20 ....thanks all you lovely souls...truly touched big hugs back at ya xxxxx

Bless you,

I really hope your okay now.. And letting your feelings out on paper really helps, bless you again. My prayers are with you xx

@musicalmissy THANKYOU my sweet...very kind words...much appreciated...writing is like my hour with a therapist...I'll be ok...I always am...:):)xxxx

@misslittleDHP I'm glad your feeling better, I'm always here for you if you need me! And well done, stay strong get better! :)) xxx

💔 stay strong my lovely, I'm glad writing this has helped. 💚

@naaviie this brought a tear to my eye, my thoughts are with you stay strong sweetie 🌺🌸🌹🌷xxx

Sorry @naaviie don't know how your name ended up on there x

@misslittleDHP the comment is for you x

@sjw no worries. True lump in my throat too.

Ohhhh! Misslittle. Feel my big hugs! Good luck for a resolution that brings peace

@naaviie @ckahn @naaviie @sjw....thank you my lovely peeps...I can feel the love and support...means so very much...THANKYOU! Xx

@misslittleDHP sad stuff hun. Hope writing it all out helps. Much love to you c

@leelee101 I'm good thanks..@leelee101 ....amazed by how sweet all you Opussians have been mwah mwah xx

So sad but beautifully written. Perhaps you can visit him xx

@redfae thanks my sweet....I don't know whether you had read my poem...Dear Dad...this is part 2...this will explain my lovely but as shit as it ounds it's not really possible to see him...his wife really does not forgive and forget...even tho she doesn't actually know me...the whole thing sucks....thanks my lovely xxx

@misslittleDHP I found it. That's so sad 😰

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@RichWithey my dad has no clue with modern technology...he only used his mobile to call me and that was probably from the 1980's...I do have his address and I was considering writing a letter to the both of them...see if she has a better side to her nature...at least then I know all I could have done I have...the thing is I don't want to rock the boat tho as he is so poorly I don't think he needs the stress!....it's shit whatever I do really....thanks for your support Hun it means a lot xxxx

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@RichWithey me tooooo...have you read my latest post...crikey I've had a scary day??...lol

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