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Naked To Your Eye

I'm going to bare my all
Show you who I am
I will strip away my layers
For you to applaud or damn

Each layer is like fine paper
Rip it gently for it'll tear
As the delicately removed layers
Reveal what is truly there

I'm the truth to be told
A lie lays in the past
I'm all that is true
No shadows I shall cast

I am in need of warmth
If you'd only let me in
Reveal your inner layers
Now I'm stripped to the skin

So much I want to learn
Of what makes you, YOU
I am naked to your eye
If only you'd show me too

©Kim Brown 7th September 2012

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (13)

@minxyMolly.....mwah Hun for the very kind repost 😘😘😘😘

@misslittleDHP no problems 😘😘

Brilliant my darling, loving this 👍❤💋👏

Superb stuff 👌🐘💦😖

This is pure brilliance 💚👏🌹✨

This is well cushty

Superb! 💜🌙✨💜🌟✨🌟✨

This is just beautiful ❤❤❤❤❤❤

It's a good test I find-to show your true self-& whether your 'lover' can do the same. Not often, in my experience....Great work Kim 😌😘

You've captured a common fear so beautifully! 🌟💗🌟

Excellent Kim 👏👏👏😘

@leelee101 @glen @naaviie @BearScribbler @sleepydragon @sarahgamal @Fly10 @ckahn @Stablish .....why thanking you all so so much for the lovely comments...so appreciated....😘😘😘😍😍😍

@Stablish @ckahn @sarahgamal @BearScribbler @naaviie @glen @leelee101 mwah mwah mwah to you all for the kind reposts...muchly appreciated 😘😘😘😘😘❤💚❤💚❤

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