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Reflections On The Water

While we stand over the bridge of life
A few whispered words you spoke
Telling me of the love you felt
On inner tears I now choke

The lilies on the pond smiled to me
Smiling of the fate they had in store
Clapping in glee for the love of us
The water rippled some more

We hold hands, never letting go
For if we did we couldn't breathe
An intricate piece of loving
Of togetherness we have weaved

If love were not yet a word
Then a word we have made
Standing on the bridge of life
The willow tree is our shade

A fate unfolds before our eyes
Together we're side by side
No matter what divine has in store
With you, this life I'll ride

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Love the imagery! 😊💚💚💚

Ahh that

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*That's beautiful 😄😄😄👏👏👏 (#FatFingers)

@HeatherAnne why thankayoooo my sweet...mwah..😘😘😘😘😘

Lovely Kim! 👏👏💗😚

@mirabahjojabo ha ha ha...you got there in the end with those fingers Hun ...glad you like 😍😘😍😘😍

@MrsS some choccies for the kind repost Hun 💝💝

@misslittleDHP 😃 💗

@mirabahjojabo a flower for the lovely repost my sweet🌹🌹🌹

@awesomeannie...a flower for the repost my sweet🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺

@HeatherAnne a flower my lovely for the much appreciated RP...🌹🌷🌹🌷🌹

@olive...some shoes my sweet for the kind repost Hun 👠👠

@misslittleDHP thanks 🌺

@naaviie...thankayoooo my darling for the repost🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Fabulous stuff!!! 💚🌷🌾🌴🍂🌅

@naaviie awww I'm chuffed you think so my sweet💐💐💐

@misslittleDHP size sevens?! Beautiful write, wonderful sentiment and imagery

Beautiful. All's well in kimland then? 👍❤😘

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@olive I have shoes in all sizes Hun 😜...THANKYOU for your lovely comments...very kind😘😘😘

@leelee101 not too bad...merely from imagination Hun, my posts today...fingers crossed xxxxxx😘😘😘

@RichWithey that makes me a happy lady that you likey Hun 😃😃😃😃😃

@leelee101 a huggie for the repost my sweet💪💪💪💪💪

@RichWithey a dance in exchange for the repost Hun 💃💃💃

@minxyMolly...thankayoooo my lovely for the lovely repost 🌺🌺🌺🌺

@misslittleDHP my pleasure is a beautiful piece 🌹🌻🌺🐚💛💗😘😘

@oushie12...thanks my sweet for the kind repost😘😘😘

@misslittleDHP this is lovely.... Very romantic ❤💜💙💛

@misslittleDHP you're welcome 😘🌸😘

@misslittleDHP still waters my sweet nice and calm... 👍❤💋

Really lovely poem💓💓

Great imagery! Really pulls you along. 🌟💗🌟

@Stablish @ckahn THANKYOU you lovely peeps...glad you liked it😘😘😘

@Stablish mwah for the repost😘

@RichWithey thanks my darling...😍😍😘😘

@RichWithey a drink for the kind repost my sweet...🍺🍺🍺🍺.

@naaviie mwah for this repost too Hun ❤💚❤😘😘😘

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@RichWithey 😍😍😍😍😍

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Sweet!

@misslittleDHP Lovely write there lady 😍

@crispbeats thanks my sweet💜💜💜

@Weirdwolf why THANKYOU very very muchly my sweet...mwah and I'll do a jig for you by way of THANKYOU for the kind repost💗💗💃💃💃

@crispbeats thanks my lovely for the kind repost💜💗

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