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Do You Love Me?

You say:
Do you love me?
I look at your worried eyes
And smile:
You are the sun in my morning -
Your warmth and heat revive me
You are the solid ground I walk on-
No matter where I'm going
My path lies with you.
The rain is you - you refresh...
Quench what I'm thirsting for
You have swept across
Every part of my body.
You are the wind at my back
Urging me forward, or as a breeze
Whispering in scented lulls
Running gently through my hair.
You are my storm, raging
At my selfishness and spite,
Razing my pettiness to the ground
And allowing my decency to grow
From the peace of my pieces.
You are the moon, my beloved moon;
Fascinating, exotic and hypnotic.
You change and bring about change
In me.
My seas - you are my seas!
You carry me away, so deep
And wet and salty, rising in waves...
Fathomless and mysterious
I plunge into you and am lost.

You put a finger to my lips
To tell me how I ramble on sometimes,
Then you say:
But DO you love me?
I say: my sunlight, my ground,
My rain, my moon, my breeze,
My storm, my seas...
Do you not see?
You are my world.

wolfie

@wolfie

The Octoberman. All I need is a bottle of Talisker, a keyboard and you. Facebook: Nikarkham www.nikarkham.co.uk

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Comments & Feedback (30)

Beautiful ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Beautiful ๐Ÿ˜Š

Beautiful mate, you big soft mutt ! ๐Ÿ˜œ, really special

Omg. That's awesome๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Wonderful Sir Wolfie, Wonderful!! ๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ†๐Ÿ†

@DaddyDooDahs I know. Gone soft. It's women with their eyes, and the skin and the curves... Need to go and live in the woods unwashed for a bit, beating my chest and a-bayin' at the moon

Or not.

@DuRoLuRo thanks! Hope she thinks so. She will either laugh and tell my I'm wet or she might go all gooey and romantic-like

@Weirdwolf cheers wolfbrother

@wolfie ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿบ๐Ÿ˜„

@wolfie Awww you soppy old man!! Was awesome mate......I'm sure she will love it ๐Ÿ‘

@smellyfingers not so much of the old! Lol.. Thanks fingers

My guess is the latter..she'll go gooey & romantic-like. And rightly so! A beautifully written & hopelessly devoted piece ๐Ÿ’โค

@wolfie I sure hope she doesn't laugh, when you pour your heart like that. Cheers๐Ÿป

That was wonderful, she is a lucky girl and you are a true poet! Well done you.

This is really beautiful, who could resist those words!?โคโคโคโคโค

@Fly10 she did :-) @DuRoLuRo she didn't .. Lol.

@crowncottage no, I'm the lucky one but thanks for your kind words

@sjw thanks Sienna :-)

@wolfie Major congrats from Denmark๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@wolfie your welcome babe ๐Ÿ˜ฝ

@DuRoLuRo You're from Denmark?

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@RichWithey well, if it helps gets the leg over ... :-)

Thanks for the repost @RichWithey ta pal

Really beautiful, all gooey-like! ;)

@MrsS just like me :-)

@MrsS just like me. Perhaps not :-) thanks

@wolfie sooo romantic ๐Ÿ˜ and sounds very truthful too. Very nicely written sir ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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