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A Journey

A long, twisting path lays ahead,
Out and over the horizon it does spread,
Lined by trees and shrubs so green,
Looking out,
excited and keen,
My walk is slow,
but sometimes I run,
Obstacles can be difficult or fun,
The roots of a giant crushed the bricks,
But I looked out and thought
- I don't quit,
Leaping over the roots,
never looking back,
Chasing along,
with ducks that go quack,
The road before me knowing it's goal,
It has a secret connection to my soul,
With dragons to love,
and fairies to sing with,
And one to forge my heart,
a sweet blacksmith,
Our paths run together for a while,
We swim across lakes and seas,
run more miles,
But soon there is a crossroad,
I turn left,
He turns right,
separated hearts but for the best,
Not meant to be,
but we taught each to love,
Time to walk on,
and admire the blue sky above,
Looking back once,
but that's enough,
My path still knows where to go,
it might still be tough,
Challenges already passed, strength made,
I look to the horizon,
Awaiting my path laid.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (40)

Like this, great poem😃👌👌

@Stablish thank you sir! Me rambling off again ☺

There should be a place like that.... 😍😘

@madhatter there is!

The story of a great love not meant to be beautifully laid out. Loved it 😊❤💗❤

You are quite beautiful Nic!! Loving this dreamy piece xx

@chy thank you for admiring my mind, hahaha 😘

@smellyfingers and you too! I'm flattered 😘😘

@naaviie lol 😊😚

YOU WON YOU LUCKY GOOSE! ✨🌷✨

@madhatter won what?!

@naaviie Loved it😻😻😻👍

@naaviie THE HOUSEHOLD CONTEST!!!! CONGRATZ GIRLY!

@LukaB thanks sweetie!

@madhatter hahaha ooooppsy I was being slow!! Any ideas for a new word? Hahaha

@naaviie Jewlery?

@naaviie Wallpaper?

@naaviie a closet?

@madhatter mirror?

@madhatter curtains?

@madhatter lamp?

@madhatter thermostat?

@madhatter Door?

@madhatter Doorknob?

@madhatter Sink?

@madhatter fride?

@naaviie 😉

Wow! I am so full oaf IDEA

@madhatter whooaaa!!! Some of those have already been done though 😔 but hurray for all the mad thinking!! Get writing about lightbulbs please!

Beautiful babe love this congrats on winning the household challenge babe xx

@naaviie DONE GIRL!

Very inspiring hun!😉😘😉

@michga thanks sweetie! 💚😘✨

Brilliant writing!

@sjw - ooh I missed that comment! Thank you ☺😘☺😘

@nikujagagirl thank yooooou! 💚💚

@naaviie You're welcome!

Brilliant! 😘💗😘

@ckahn thank you! 💚✨😘

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