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Fire

* '
, *
Th A ' I *
* ere nd am
is a love * a blaze
fire in ~ in my of white
my soul,heart,__light,~
A LIFE YOU JUST CAN'T
KEEP IN THE DARK

Reads:

There is a fire in my soul,
And love in my heart,
I am a blaze of white light,
A life you just can't keep in the dark.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Very good hun! 🔥❤👍💋

@leelee101 thanks lee 💚🔥😘✨

Very clever! I'm liking your shapepoetry, I haven't done one in ages this has inspired me ☺😘

@sjw - oooh excellent, I look forward to it 😊😊 I like to do one occasionally 💚

Super duper Hun 🍸🍸🍸

@misslittleDHP - oooh martini thank you - on me 🍸🍸🍸🍸

I love this, it's fully awesome! 🔥

@Irrational_Kimmi - fully awesome? Wow thank you! 💚😘✨

@naaviie haha sorry! It's a phrase I've picked up from...well, Johnny I think! It's like one up from being plain awesome 😉😜

@Irrational_Kimmi - hey don't apologise I'm flattered!! 💚💚💚

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@RichWithey - give with one hand, take with the other 💚🔫💋

I first read it left to right and thought the first word was 'Thai':Pthen i realised it doesnt make sense that way😜 Great poem

@TommyWalsh 😂😂 yeh I thought that might happen! Oops! Thanks though 💚💚💚

I could not read this. Am I stupid...

@blindsilence read each flame downwards individually then the last two lines left to right. Or just read the poem in normal format on the next page?

Fabulous!👏😌😘

@Fly10 - thank you Leigh 💚😘✨

@naaviie ohhh. I see clearly now. Good stuff. Face palm for me then.

@blindsilence hahaha no worries, thanks for reading 😊

Brilliant!!! With a capital"B"!!!! 🌟✨🌟✨

@sleepydragon 💚😁☺ thank you Diana!! 🌹🌹

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