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"Morning, Petal,"

"Morning, Petal," she whispers,
Turning on the light; its soft orange glow filling the room,
Growing bright,
The soft new baby, curled, wrapped up tight,
Opening her big brown eyes,
A mother's touch; soothing her cries,
Comforted and held close,
The baby coos, pulled from her sleep,
Yet in warm arms she makes not a peep,
"Welcome to the world, my little one,
This is your dad, and this is me - your mum."

[Written on request for a friend of a friend who just had a baby]

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Beautiful👏👏👏

@sarahgamal - thank you Sarah! ☺ was a tricky write for me!

Awwwww... They'll love it hunny! ❤❤👍😘

@leelee101 - thanks I hope so ☺☺💚😘✨

They'll love this. Captures those little snuggly moments. 👏💚

@eddie12309 - hehehe thanks ☺☺☺

Adorable 😍😘

@misslittleDHP - yey the mummys have approved it! Haha 😄😄

Awwww this really capture the moment ❤😘

@sjw - awww yey ☺☺☺

I love it!!:)

@enoelk - awww thank you!!! 💚💚💚

Aww so sweet well done x

@lonelynutmeg98 thank you Megan ☺☺

@naaviie no probs

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