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Within this Mind

The walls are high,
And the bars are thick,
The darkness looms,
Within this crypt,
A shattering cry,
Not heard by one,
Left so alone,
Where fingers drum -
Tap - tap - tap,
On the rock they go,
Sending me in a spiral,
Forever low,
Within this mind,
Faith is lost,
And hope is weary,
As love has no cost,
An empty...
Ravished emptiness,
Where the richest
Become penniless,
The insane created
From mortal sanity,
A brave conversion
From darkness' agony,
Despair is hidden,
In rotted eyes,
A drifting,
trivial prize,
Just tap - tap - tap,
Fingers on the rock,
Helpless, meaningless,
Behind this mental lock.

naaviie

@naaviie

23, Vegetarian, (insanely busy) Vet student pondering about love, life and dragons.

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Love it!!!!! 👏👏👏 Brilliantly written 😉

@MelchiorJ13 thanks Jack 💚😘✨

Awesome nic. Very good 👍❤👏💋

@leelee101 - thank you sir - have some afternoon 🍻🍻☕☕ 😂😜

@naaviie ooo do you know, I think I will... thank you 👍❤

@leelee101 ☺☺☕☕ me too, it is cuppa time!

This is great Hun 👏👏👏👏💗✨💗

@misslittleDHP - thanks Kim 💚✨💚☺

Great write😊❤👍

@mpallister24 - thanks sweetie! 💚✨

Very good and powerful

@lonelynutmeg98 - thanks Megan ☺☺

@naaviie no probs

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