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Silver

I like silver better older
With its fine blue dust
Taking shelter in the notches
A lovely sort of rust
It looks much more refined
With its overcoat of grey
Like the swirling cirrus clouds
On an overly bright day
It smells of must and ages
The smell that I do love
it looks placid
and quite calming
With white splotches
Like a dove
New silver reflects far too much
It always looks so fake
Given the choice between the two
Old silver I would take

This poem is for my great grandmother who is in the hospital, but recovering quickly :)

onyxheart

@onyxheart

12 year old who usually only cares about things other people find boring or stupid.

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Comments & Feedback (6)

You have a very eloquent style of writing...classic and beautiful

Excellent, sure she'll love it. πŸ‘β€ And a speedy recovery to her too 😘

I hope your great gran is much better and I agree about the silver too! πŸ‘΅β˜Ί

BVHarding that made my day :)@leelee101 I hope so, and thanks! @crowncottage so do I, and I'm glad you agree! :D

Beautifully written. I hope your great gran is better. ✨

@yikici me too. And thank you :)

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