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Goodbye Nan

A year or so ago my nan passed away
When she was here we didn't have much to say
I was her first grandchild which didn't seem to mean much
And through the years we didn't really keep in touch

Then she got the dreaded C
Pancreatic cancer at the age of 83
Wished we could have been closer
Missed having chats and getting to hug her

Into the hospice she went and the day before she died
I sat by her bed wanting to stay by her side
She held my hand tightly with tears down her cheek
Slowly breathing and desperately trying to speak

But I guess all those years that went flying by
Had come into her heart which made her cry
So wishing what could and should have been
Which then in turn made me cry at this so sad scene.

rayleen43

@rayleen43

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Comments & Feedback (4)

Anne I haven't 'liked' it cos it's so sad ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

I have because I was with you an always will be... Incredibly well put... xxx

@leelee101 @Barknbite I understand leelee101. Affected me more than I thought it would. Thank you always@Barknbite xxx

@rayleen43 so sorry for you :'( xxx

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