See the warnings, see the signs
It easier to just act blind
Until all that's left is silence
Together you feel apart
No longer speaking, no longer feeling
The space once crossed now void
Empty heart that once was full
There's nothing now it's gone
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A redhead writer trying to get my novel published. I enjoy writing YA Paranormal Romances and so far had a short story and article published. I maintain my blog and website at www.alisonaldridge.co.nr
We smile. But not at each other. We laugh. But not together. We cry. To leave one another. We sleep. But not together. We listen. But never to each other. We talk. But to disagree with the other.
It seemed that just a day ago, we were doing fine. I held your hand, and you held mine. We hugged at dawn when you needed to leave All I knew was that I believed.
I can't recall the moment when the doubt ripped your face, Or put my finger on quite when the fog took your place..
I'm not quite sure what to say I suppose its been some time I guess I should start with chit chat Make sure everything with you is fine But don't you think it's awkward. All this idle chat.
We cross each other in the hall Strangers now in body and soul I have been consumed by chores He has been busy opening life's doors We are now strangers in bed It seems what we had is now held by a...
You walk in the door, and explain about your day, You describe in detail who said what and when and why.
He doesn't notice you anymore. He looks right through you. This is one of those moments, you run everything you want to say through in your head and decide to keep quiet.
A pretence of sleep, a steady breath. Your touch is warm and full of love But I remain cold. There is love here, but patience is thin And we are stretched out.
@PolkadotLove Thanks hun. I flattered you feel I'm that good and wish you all the best with your own writing ๐
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