We smile
But not at each other
We laugh
But not together
We cry
To leave one another
We sleep
But not together
We listen
But never to each other
We talk
But to disagree with the other
We walk
But not together
We are still here
But we should run away from each other
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A 32 mother of 2 .
See the warnings, see the signs. It easier to just act blind. Until all that's left is silence. Together you feel apart. No longer speaking, no longer feeling. The space once crossed now void.
It seemed that just a day ago, we were doing fine. I held your hand, and you held mine. We hugged at dawn when you needed to leave All I knew was that I believed.
I can't recall the moment when the doubt ripped your face, Or put my finger on quite when the fog took your place..
You walk in the door, and explain about your day, You describe in detail who said what and when and why.
I'm not quite sure what to say I suppose its been some time I guess I should start with chit chat Make sure everything with you is fine But don't you think it's awkward. All this idle chat.
We cross each other in the hall Strangers now in body and soul I have been consumed by chores He has been busy opening life's doors We are now strangers in bed It seems what we had is now held by a...
He doesn't notice you anymore. He looks right through you. This is one of those moments, you run everything you want to say through in your head and decide to keep quiet.
A pretence of sleep, a steady breath. Your touch is warm and full of love But I remain cold. There is love here, but patience is thin And we are stretched out.
@sarahgamal you don't seem too blocked to me hunny. But if you're not ready to write, don't force it. As you say just enjoy the reading ❤❤❤👏💋🌹
How does this happen? So often relationships drift like this, and people don't notice till it's too late. Very well written, very powerful words. Well done indeed. 💛✨💜🌟💙
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