Haikus are the worst
I need help to write good ones
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I love gymnastics. Want to become a future anesthesiologist. Any tips for writing are always helpful. Open to all comments.
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Just write what's in your mind and heart. It looks like you already know the rhythm part down pat. If need bee you can look at other haikus written by others to get a sense. Best of luck😘
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