#freeverse (or not?!)
Took that leap,
Off the
Edge,
Soaring
Flying
Free
I felt,
Jumped with
Despair,
Hope
Less,
Waiting
To hit the
Bottom,
But instead,
I soared,
I floated,
An
Exhilarating
Journey,
To the clouds,
And higher,
With each
Breath I
Take,
My smile
Is bigger,
My heart
Is fuller,
Constraints
Are torn
Away,
I'm headed
For the
Stars,
Where
Dreams
Are truly
Made,
I'm free,
Being just
Me.
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Hi I'm Sam!!! Kik: sammielee46... "Dance lightly with life" - Jonathan Huie // "Wisdom begins with wonder" - Walt Whitman.
Search all you may for the light in paradise.. While all the time pretending there is a hidden prize. Run run , run all you can, Chase behind the forgotten mist behind that summer van.
This little butterfly is ready to be set free. To be the butterfly she ought to be. To see the things a butterfly ought to see. To explore the world and all it's glory.
I returned to the start on this four cornered square. Wondering why and how did I get back here. Surely it should be a circle as I look down the line.
Letting go So much harder than it sounds. First a vision of a God on a throne, next a marriage. Crumbling identity Lost, alone on the edge of the abyss And then what is this.
#tittybiscuits. I'm just a tree standing in a forest of confusion. Big and strong and under no delusion. Knowing its time to break free my roots. Happiness comes courtesy of my special boots.
Viriya is standing in front of a mighty mountain. This is nothing new. There has always been a mountain in front of me, big or small.
The life that I love sat me down one day And it told me that it was going away It said that it had loved me but I was holding it back And that things between us had gotten off track.
My feet are now standing where they’ve never been before... The surroundings are unfamiliar... the sky is a different blue to where I’ve been... the grass is a different shade of green...
@leelee101 thanks honey, I've never written free verse before, so not entirely sure what I wrote is that!! But hey I had fun!! 😊 Thanks for the lovely repost honey 😘❤
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