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How Does It Feel?

sara_lou
sara_lou • 218 followers

How does it feel to know the hurt you have caused?
Does it make your heart feel bitter and cold?

How does it feel to know there's no longer a girl just an empty shell?
Does it make you see the torment and hell?

How does it feel to see that girl shattered into pieces?
Do you see how her existence ceases?

How does it feel to witness destruction?
Knowing it was all under your construction.

How will it feel when you see she has moved on?
When her thoughts of you are gone.

Will you finally know the angst and pain?
Do you think your heart will strain?

#confrontation #emotional-poetry #general #healing #psychological-pain #trauma
sara_lou

@sara_lou

Hi I'm 25 I love English literature and language. I love travel. Kik- saralouise88 Instagram sara_louise_88 Twitter @SaralouiseD88

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Comments & Feedback (12)

leelee101
leelee101
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:31 AM

Message here Hun. Hope he gets it, and hope you're ok 👍❤🌹

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:33 AM

@leelee101 I'm good thanks hunni just needed to finish this piece and put some old demons to rest 😊❤

leelee101
leelee101
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:34 AM

@sara_lou good, glad to hear it sweetheart 👍❤🌹

sarahgamal
sarahgamal
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:36 AM

Hope u in the "moved on" phase ❤😘

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:39 AM

@leelee101 thank you for being so supportive truly appreciate it hunni, had thinking space this past 24hours, needed to get that clearer perspective! 😘❤

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:42 AM

@sarahgamal just enjoying being me! Past is where it now belongs 😘❤

patdolan83
patdolan83
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:48 AM

I've written something very similar recently...I know where this comes from 😔 writing helped me big time

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:51 AM

@patdolan83 I've found sometimes in life some of our greatest moments comes from our inner strength deal with hurt and pain 😔

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 1:51 AM

to deal with

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 9:10 AM

@elf_girl thanks for the RP 😊

sara_lou
sara_lou
Oct 21, 2012 at 3:51 PM

@Zhana thanks for the RP 💐

Zhana
Zhana
Oct 21, 2012 at 3:53 PM

@sara_lou you deserve it love 👏👏

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